Sunday, February 13, 2011

Mock, Blog Post 5, IAR 221


Just as the bells and chimes build up the momentum,
The bold colors build up the contrast of this garage,
The structure is built for a certain music style,
One of old rock to be played at a high volume,
The compostion of Pink Floyd matches the proportion of this old garage.

(Free Verse)


1 comment:

  1. I think you understood the building momentum. But contemplate the space between specific sounds and the lingering balance of other instruments. Just as the portico lingers almost wanting to balance the space. What is held upon the roof catches the portico as your eye moves across the picture. The horizontal lines set the momentum of the picture. think of objects moving horizontally.

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